Field & Frames: Feedback & Self Evaluation

Feedback:

Self Evaluation: As I had 3 days to review and make amendments to the film after getting the feedback I used that time to improve the things that lacked in the film. As there had to me some improvement made in the sound of the film I first started with that and added additional sound effects to the film, I also adjusted the sync of the sound and the film as it lagged a bit before. As my professor had watched the movie before the screening he had guided me to how to execute the film after I got his feedback I added the features he suggested and also added more clips to the film so the film isn’t boring or a stretch. I replaced the dream sequence in the end of the film. I added stars and glitters video to show that it is a dream sequence. I also added opening and shutting of eyes effect in the start and end of the film. I reshot some scenes to get the perfect clips and I also added screen recordings of articles showing how using the screens 24/7 affects us and how we have developed a phobia of being without out phones. I have added them as holograms so it is subtle.